The writing was good and the book was fairly fast paced but the story just felt...scattered (for lack of a better word) or maybe not as focused as it could have been -- it definitely could have been tightened up a lot -- and the author seemed to spend a lot of time trying to convince us the hero was a cop. I dunno...she's a good writer but I'm not a romantic suspense fan and I guess on many levels this just didn't work for me.